來源:網絡資源 2023-01-13 12:55:56
重復累贅
同學們在寫書面表達時應盡量做到簡潔:寫句子沒有一個多余的詞,寫段落沒有一個多余的句子。
例:
1. In spite of the fact that he is lazy, I like him.
盡管他很懶惰,我還是喜歡他。
解析:本句的“the fact that he is lazy”系同位語從句,我們可按照“簡潔”的原則加以簡化。
改為:In spite of his laziness, I like him.
2. For the people who are diligent and kind, money is just the thing to be used to buy the thing they need.
對于勤奮善良的人來說,錢只是用來購買所需東西的工具。
解析:整個句子可以大大簡化,重復累贅過多。
改為:Diligent, caring people use money only to buy what they need.
歡迎使用手機、平板等移動設備訪問中考網,2025中考一路陪伴同行!>>點擊查看